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This is dedicated to :iconahoberer78: and :iconmeljoy68:
To Anthony for suggesting this poem when I was uninspired. And to Melanie, the creator of this wonderful poem.

This is my vision of the poem...the water represents the darkness overtaking her.


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Yours

I hear your voice from unseen distant shores-
a consolation as the night draws nigh:
As darkness overtakes me, I am yours.

You leave no opportunity to mourn
the loss of light, for even as I cry
I hear your voice from unseen distant shores-
a soft melodic sound I can’t abhor.
You soothe me, as a gentle lullaby.
As darkness overtakes me I am yours.

And as the stars above begin to pour
their silver dust of night into my eyes,
I hear your voice from unseen distant shores-
an echo tempting me, a phantom lure.
You give my heart the wings it needs to fly
As darkness overtakes me: I am yours.

Upon these wings my pain and fears are borne
to leave me naught but peace. I can’t deny
I hear your voice from unseen distant shores:
As darkness overtakes me, I am yours

*meljoy68

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:iconelektrake:
it seems youre on a roll :) lovely, as usual :love:

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The road to victory is a small step with a lot of bitchin...
:iconmeljoy68:
Shut! Up!! :faint:

I'm giddy this is soooooo good!!!! :giggle:


Wow... :happycry: This is amazing, Shelley... I love how she fades into the water as it overcomes her...I got goosebumps!!!!


You did a fabulous job, and the words are SO much more now. :hug: Thank you for using my poetry, that's a huge compliment!!!

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I write the words that come and go
That swirl around all to and fro
Inside my head, where they scream and shout,
Pushing and shoving to find a way out
to wind up on paper for all to peruse-
interpret my words any way that you choose.
:iconsilentplea:
thank you! :hug:
Actually I was having trouble coming up with anything after I got back from my vacation, so
thankfully I was inspired!

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~Shelley

What lies behind us
And what lies before us
Are small matters compared to
what lies within us

~Ralph Waldo Emerson~
:iconmeljoy68:
Oh!!! And thank you Anthony for suggesting this to Shelley!! :blowkiss: :love: :hug:

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I write the words that come and go
That swirl around all to and fro
Inside my head, where they scream and shout,
Pushing and shoving to find a way out
to wind up on paper for all to peruse-
interpret my words any way that you choose.
:iconsilentplea:
hahahaha you're funny!
Thank you for supplying me with some inspiration! I saw this picture in my head as I was reading the poem...instantly! Yay for goosebumps! I'm glad that you like it :hug:

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~Shelley

What lies behind us
And what lies before us
Are small matters compared to
what lies within us

~Ralph Waldo Emerson~
:iconsilentplea:
I'm so glad that he did!

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~Shelley

What lies behind us
And what lies before us
Are small matters compared to
what lies within us

~Ralph Waldo Emerson~
:iconmeljoy68:
Seriously!!! I got huge goosebumps!! It's REALLY good!! :iconspinplz:

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I write the words that come and go
That swirl around all to and fro
Inside my head, where they scream and shout,
Pushing and shoving to find a way out
to wind up on paper for all to peruse-
interpret my words any way that you choose.
:iconsilentplea:
:boogie: :icondweebdanceplz: :bounce: :highfive:

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~Shelley

What lies behind us
And what lies before us
Are small matters compared to
what lies within us

~Ralph Waldo Emerson~
:iconmoroka323:
Very lovely work. Its gorgeous :love:

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||My stock-photography *moroka||My photo-manips =moroka323||

:love: Thanks a lot for your support :love:
:iconsilentplea:
thank you so much! :hug:

--
~Shelley

What lies behind us
And what lies before us
Are small matters compared to
what lies within us

~Ralph Waldo Emerson~

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